r_vecchio: ([Ray] Heaven On Earth)
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When Ray’s grandfather died, he cried.

His Pop had sneered at him over a brandy glass and told him to grow up, that everybody dies sooner or later, and that men don’t show their emotions if they want to stay men.

Ray couldn’t understand it.

Grandpop Vecchio had just keeled over dead, one minute he was there, the next he was gone, and Ray’s Pop didn’t seem to give a damn.

“Better him than me, the interfering old bastard had it coming.”

How could someone deserve death?

“Least I got the house.”

Ray had heard stories about his grandfather but he didn’t believe them. Tales of how he’d whip off his belt and beat his son seven shades of blue if he didn’t say his pleases and thank yous. How he’d come home drunk and the next morning, Grandma Vecchio would have somehow fallen down the stairs again in the middle of the night and have an almighty bruise right across her cheek. Stories of drunken brawls with neighbours, nights spent locked up in a cell, how hard his Pop had had it when he was growing up.

Ray wondered if it was a sin to not believe a word your father says.

No-one could be that mean.

Ray was five when his grandfather died.

He was seven before he learned that people could.

***

Ray was twenty-eight when his own Pop died. He knew it was a sin not to cry.

But at least he got the house.


ooc: I apologise for how crap this is, but Ray needed a prompt response for the month by TOMORROW and since I have an essay in for tomorrow afternoon, I had to bang something out in five minutes. So yes. It's crap. I don't like having to post it. But I had to do something >.< Sorry!

Date: 2007-10-17 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] in-a-chinashop.livejournal.com
Hey, I don't think this is crap. I like it ^_^ I just hope Ray can break the cycle :s

Date: 2007-10-17 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] r-vecchio.livejournal.com
Thanks. Me too. I get the feeling he would never ever hit a child but in the heat of the moment, wouldn't think twice about hitting a grown man... :s

Date: 2007-10-17 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] in-a-chinashop.livejournal.com
*eyes widen*

Oh.

I've just realised that their Big Fight might not be over Beattie after all... Or, even Evan....

Date: 2007-10-17 10:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] r-vecchio.livejournal.com
They've just been lying to each other the entire time... omg, I wanna know what's gonna happen when they find out. It's like waiting for the new season of Ugly Betty to start!

Uh huh! Oh.

Minnesota, anyone? Oh God, Ray's just informed me he has two fists and one is defintely reserved for Brayden if he gets the chance and is wound up enough.. BOOF! BOOF!

Date: 2007-10-17 10:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] in-a-chinashop.livejournal.com
I never knew that Turnbull was such a big liar! I mean, I knew that the smiles were fake and inside he's miserable with his existance as Consulate paperweight, and he just pretends to be dumb and clumsy (although, often, he is, as well...)... I guess it connects that he's actually quite good at lying, but, wow, so many secrets for such an innocent guy.

Heh. I have these soap opera style scenes playing in my head now!

Date: 2007-10-17 11:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] r-vecchio.livejournal.com
I have these soap opera style scenes playing in my head now!

Me too! S'll be goooooood!

Date: 2007-10-17 10:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] in-a-chinashop.livejournal.com
You ever get the feeling that your only use is that you have fingers with which you can type? Your muses just go off and make their own stories with barely and guiding from your own brain? Lives of their own, I swear....

Date: 2007-10-17 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] r-vecchio.livejournal.com
...no? But then again, I rule Ray with an iron thumb.. or something.

Heh, yes. All the time. There are little tiny men living inside out heads.

Date: 2007-10-17 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lipstickcat.livejournal.com
OMG! Don't do that to me with the "no, I'm sane."ness. My heart just stopped, and I thought "Oh! God! It's just me! I look like a complete freak with a split personality now!!!"

Phew.

Date: 2007-10-17 10:13 pm (UTC)
ext_10634: (dS | our lives)
From: [identity profile] snoopypez.livejournal.com
This is so NOT crap.

No-one could be that mean.

Ray was five when his grandfather died.

He was seven before he learned that people could.


That KILLED me.

Date: 2007-10-17 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] r-vecchio.livejournal.com
Aww, thanks. It's nothing like I wanted to write but I literally had five minutes where I thought "...!!! Damn! Forgot about Ray's prompt! *type type type*" I don't like it when I'm rushed like that :-\

Thank you kindly for your lovely comments! *pets seven year old Ray* Me thinks me wants to write more kid!Ray fic tooooo!

Date: 2007-10-17 10:21 pm (UTC)
ext_10634: (dS | ot3)
From: [identity profile] snoopypez.livejournal.com
Well you did wonderfully for being so rushed. :D

(also, the other comments in this post are scaring me. Just so you know. ;P)

Date: 2007-10-17 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] r-vecchio.livejournal.com
Heh. I wasn't fishing for that! But thank you again.

(Lol! Well, Ray hasn't hit anyone in a long long time. Langoustini is getting bored in there, all alone in Ray's head! He controls the fists so whooooooo, watch out!)

Date: 2007-10-17 10:29 pm (UTC)
ext_10634: (dS | vecchio)
From: [identity profile] snoopypez.livejournal.com
:D

(well, I don't mind the hitting. ;) I'm just scared for Ray and Ren, wooooe.)

Date: 2007-10-17 10:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] r-vecchio.livejournal.com
(But look at the hotel they'll be staying in!!! At least they'll have nice bathrooms in which to go wash the blood off!!)

Date: 2007-10-17 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lipstickcat.livejournal.com
I think we might have to run duel threads - one the night before going to see the Ride, and one of the events during the day after the night before. Purely so they can have sex in the whirlpool before whatever happens happens XD

See? Ren's making my fingers type this....

Date: 2007-10-17 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] r-vecchio.livejournal.com
That whirpool is SO hilarious!! XD Oh! It's probably in the bridal suite XDXDXD

You lie! :P

Date: 2007-10-17 11:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lipstickcat.livejournal.com
LOL! You're probably right. It'd be tacky to have that in every room, I guess...

I do not! Ever! Ren's being all happy and playful and breaking the forth wall. See? I think it's the fish teddies Ray got him, put him in a good mood.

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